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Lucy vs. The HOA

After uncovering a million-dollar fraud in her neighborhood HOA, a precocious 11-year-old enlists her Private Detective father to help finish the investigation her deceased mother started years ago. *Scored two 8's on The Blacklist.

Act I — The Junior Detective Lucy Ross is an eleven-year-old true-crime obsessive with a sharp eye, a huge sense of justice, and a private investigator father, Jake, who is still raising her in the shadow of her late mother, Jenny LaForce Ross — a brilliant defense attorney Lucy barely remembers but deeply idolizes.

When Lucy tries to rally her suburban neighborhood around building a community pool, she runs into Bartlebee Jones, the fanny-pack-wearing, clipboard-wielding HOA president who seems to control Maple Grove through petty fines and fear. At first, Bartlebee appears to be nothing more than an annoying neighborhood bureaucrat. But Lucy starts watching him and sees him collecting cash from HOA envelopes, throwing away suspicious documents, and issuing warnings when she gets too close.

Jake initially dismisses the HOA drama as harmless suburban nonsense. But Lucy is convinced something is wrong. With help from her grandmother Gigi, Lucy begins digging into public records and discovers a startling fact: Maple Grove’s HOA was officially dissolved in 2001. Which means Bartlebee has been running a fake HOA for years.

Act II — The Paper Trail Lucy and Gigi’s investigation deepens. They learn that Bartlebee has been collecting fake dues and fines from residents for decades, while pretending to act as the authority of Maple Grove. The scam is bigger than missing cash: Bartlebee and two shady lawyers, Sherman and Thurman Truesdale, have been targeting elderly homeowners with bogus violations, legal threats, and intimidation until they sell their homes under pressure.

The case becomes personal when Ruby Johnson, one of Bartlebee’s victims, reveals that she once sought help from a young attorney with piercing green eyes — Jenny Ross. Jake realizes Jenny had been looking into Bartlebee’s scheme shortly before her death. Lucy, desperate to connect the mystery to her mother, briefly suspects Bartlebee may have caused Jenny’s fatal accident. Rene, Jenny’s friend and accident survivor, gently corrects her: Jenny died in a senseless crash, not a murder plot. Lucy learns a painful but important lesson — justice requires facts, not just feelings.

As the evidence mounts, Jake finally sees that Lucy is right. Together with Gigi and Special Agent Kowalski, Ross & Ross Investigations turns Lucy’s neighborhood obsession into a real fraud case. Lucy, Jake, and Gigi map the scam: Bartlebee dissolved the HOA, continued collecting money, pocketed fees, hoarded funds, and helped the Truesdale lawyers pressure vulnerable seniors out of their homes.

Act III — Lucy vs. Bartlebee With Delores McKinney about to be bullied into selling her home, Lucy, Jake, and Kowalski set a trap. Delores wears a wire during a meeting with Sherman and Thurman, who threaten her with fake HOA enforcement and foreclosure. When the lawyers escalate by locking the door and cutting off her phone, Lucy and Jake intervene under the cover of a fake Girl Scout cookie delivery, giving Kowalski the proof he needs.

The final showdown comes at a packed Maple Grove community meeting. Bartlebee arrives with Sherman and Thurman, threatening defamation suits and trying to reclaim control. But Lucy presents the evidence: the 2001 dissolution papers, the missing money, the photos of Bartlebee pocketing cash, and the pattern of elderly residents being driven from their homes.

Bartlebee insists he was protecting the neighborhood and keeping order, but Lucy corners him with one simple question: who gave him permission? His authority collapses in front of the entire community. Kowalski arrests Bartlebee, Sherman, and Thurman for fraud, theft, elder intimidation, and conspiracy.

One year later, Maple Grove has used the recovered money to build the community pool Lucy wanted from the beginning. Jake has opened himself to life again, including dating Emily, while continuing his innocence work. Lucy has grown into a more careful, more compassionate detective — still bold, still funny, but now wiser about the difference between suspicion and proof.

As Bartlebee serves community service as a volunteer parking enforcer, Lucy watches him with amusement and insight: he was never just after money. He needed rules, control, and order. And in the post-credits scene, Lucy turns her investigative eye toward a new target: the school PTA.

Script Excerpt
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Format:
Screenplay
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Budget:
Modest
In the Vein Of:
Enola Holmes

Posted:
07/16/2026
Updated:
07/16/2026
Author Bio:
I'm a private investigator in the Chicago area, focusing on wrongful convictions. I’m also a suburban dad who talks to his neighbors about leaf maintenance and HOA regulations. I’ve recently discovered I really like writing screenplays.

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