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The Loss of Heaven

In 1961, a guilt-ridden Catholic schoolboy convinced he has damned himself and his family by breaking "Divine Law" must confront fear, superstition, and a violent bully after a tragic church fire forces him to become the hero he never believed he could be.

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Set on a tightly knit New York island community in 1961, The Loss Of Heaven follows twelve-year-old Anthony Carino, a sensitive Catholic schoolboy consumed by fear and guilt. Raised in a strict religious household and educated by unforgiving nuns, Anthony becomes convinced he has committed a mortal sin after touching the Eucharistic Host during his First Holy Communion. Terrified that God will punish him and his family, Anthony begins seeing every hardship around him as divine retribution.

And hardship is everywhere. His father suffers a devastating fall from a ladder. His younger brother endures cruel torment from a sadistic nun. His sixteen-year-old sister becomes pregnant and is cast out by the family in shame. News of communism and nuclear war fills Anthony with dread. Then tragedy strikes when his best friend, Paul Jordan, is killed by a truck. Anthony believes Paul’s death is yet another punishment caused by his own unforgivable sin. Amid his spiraling fears, Anthony forms an unlikely friendship with Jimmy Wesley, a gentle thirty-year-old man with the mind of a child. Years earlier, Jimmy was struck in the head by a baseball during a Little League game, leaving him permanently impaired and dependent on his devoted mother, Emma. Jimmy sees something of his own lost childhood in Anthony, while Anthony finds comfort in Jimmy’s innocence and loyalty.

Their bond is tested by Johnny Belden, the neighborhood bully who relentlessly targets Anthony and mocks Jimmy. When Johnny attempts to steal Jimmy’s prized transistor radio, Anthony tries to defend his friend but is paralyzed by fear and humiliation, reinforcing his belief that he will never be brave enough to stand up for anyone — including himself.

Everything comes to a head during the church’s annual fundraising bazaar. Terrified after being stalked by Johnny, Anthony flees into the empty church and lights fifty prayer candles, desperately pleading for forgiveness and protection. Exhausted, he falls asleep in a pew — only to awaken in Jimmy’s arms as flames engulf the church.

Jimmy rescues Anthony from the inferno, but Anthony suddenly remembers the treasured baseball card collection he left behind — cards given to him by Paul’s grieving mother. Before Anthony can stop him, Jimmy rushes back into the blazing church to retrieve them. Moments later, a collapsing crossbeam knocks Jimmy unconscious.

Certain that this catastrophe is one final act of God’s wrath, Anthony is forced to confront the terror that has ruled his life. Summoning every ounce of courage he possesses, he re-enters the burning church to save Jimmy. Battling smoke, fire, and collapsing debris, Anthony struggles to drag the larger man to safety until he finally collapses himself, leaving the final rescue to arriving firefighters.

In the hospital aftermath, Anthony’s emotional walls begin to crumble. Comforted by the compassionate Father Lumin, he finally confesses his long-held fears and learns he was never condemned by God at all. Freed from the crushing burden of guilt, Anthony sneaks into Jimmy’s hospital room, where doctors fear Jimmy may never awaken. Sitting beside his friend, Anthony switches on Jimmy’s beloved red transistor radio. The familiar voice of Yankees announcer Mel Allen fills the room — and somehow reaches Jimmy. Against all expectations, Jimmy wakens.

But the miracle carries a mystery: baseball season has not yet begun.

Transformed by friendship, faith, and sacrifice, Anthony faces his final test when Johnny steals a treasured autographed Whitey Ford baseball card. In front of classmates, teachers, and God himself, Anthony finally stands up to the bully who once terrorized him. In doing so, he earns not only a hard-won victory, but a clean slate — finally understanding that courage, compassion, and forgiveness matter far more than fear.

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Format:
Screenplay
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Budget:
Low
Starring Roles For:
Solid Teen Actor #1
Solid Teen Actor #1
Victor Garber
In the Vein Of:
Avalon
Radio Flyer
Posted:
05/12/2026
Updated:
05/12/2026
Author Bio:
Art D'Alessandro was graduated summa cum laude from Rollins College in Winter Park, Florida where he was the recipient of both top prose and poetry writing awards. He co-founded and ran The Maile School, one of the southeast’s most highly regarded talent training facilities for over 20 years before its sale in 2004. The school's alumni include Mandy Moore, Spencer Locke, Norm Lewis, Arielle Kebbel and two Miss Americas.

His love of film has led to over forty screenplays bearing his name as writer, including “THE FINAL SEASON” starring Sean Astin, Powers Boothe, Tom Arnold and Rachael Leigh Cook.

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