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Succubus In The Hood

Driven by trauma, an immortal succubus Mary Jane Pittman fights to save the innocent and punish the guilty in the dark corners of Atlanta, but when a young girl in danger enters her world, she's thrust into a battle of morality, vengeance, and survival.

Synopsis:

Set in the contemporary Newman Projects of Atlanta, "Succubus in the Hood" tells the story of Mary Jane Pittman, a woman cursed to live as a succubus since the slavery era. Born in 1836, Mary Jane carries the burden of her immortality and her need to consume the 'youth aura' of men to maintain her youthful appearance and survive. This supernatural ability transforms her into a hideous creature if she does not feed regularly.

Haunted by the tragic death of her father during the slavery era, Mary Jane moves from city to city, using her powers to exact revenge on those she deems wicked, especially men who have committed heinous acts. Her path leads her to the Newman Projects, where she finds a sense of purpose in protecting the community from its very own monsters. However, she maintains a strict moral code, targeting only those she perceives as deserving of her wrath.

Mary Jane's solitary existence takes a turn when she befriends Emma Watson, a 16-year-old girl struggling with her own traumatic experiences in the Projects. Emma's mother, Ruth, battles addiction, and her stepfather, Martin, is abusive. When Mary Jane discovers Martin's intentions towards Emma, her protective instincts intensify. She becomes a guardian figure to Emma, who sees beyond Mary Jane's supernatural façade to the tormented soul beneath.

Mary Jane's actions in the Projects do not go unnoticed. FBI Agent Ellah Fitzpatrick, who has been tracking the mysterious series of male disappearances linked to Mary Jane, gets closer to uncovering her true identity. As the narrative unfolds, Emma learns more about Mary Jane's past and the depth of her curse. Tensions escalate when Martin attempts to blackmail Emma, leading to a violent confrontation that reveals Mary Jane's true nature to everyone.

The story reaches its climax with Agent Fitzpatrick and other agents confronting Mary Jane. Realizing there is no escape and unwilling to harm the innocents around her, Mary Jane transforms into her monstrous form in front of them, confirming the truth about her existence. Ultimately, Mary Jane decides to flee, continuing her solitary journey and eternal mission of vigilantism.

In the aftermath, Emma and Ruth, grappling with the truth and their own personal challenges, decide to leave the Newman Projects for a fresh start. As Mary Jane continues her eternal quest in a new city, the lines between monster and savior remain blurred, leaving her legacy in the Projects a complex tapestry of fear, respect, and legend.

Succubus in the Hood is a gripping tale of revenge, redemption, and the gray areas of morality, set against the backdrop of urban struggle and supernatural lore.

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Screenplay
Budget:
Low
Starring Roles For:
Keke Palmer - Mary Jane Pittman
Jurnee Smollett - FBI Agent Ellah Fitzpatrick
Marsai Martin - Emma Watson
In the Vein Of:
Blade
Candyman
The Craft
Posted:
06/19/2024
Updated:
06/19/2024
Author Bio:
Atlanta-based screenwriter from New York who specializes in writing fantasy, horror and drama based stories. I grew up in the Bronx, New York and I’ve always been passionate about storytelling and intrigued by the impression it leaves on people that somehow guides the decisions we make in life. I bring good storytelling, originality, and excitement to my stories and I love diving headfirst into the research and overall production of them. I am a writer, and I love my craft.

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