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Whirlabout

A New York actor returns to his decaying hometown to care for his father, only to uncover dark family secrets, confront a lifetime of abuse, and face a harrowing moral reckoning that could either destroy—or finally heal—his fractured family.

Returning to his decaying hometown, New York actor Danny Patrick is struck by how far everything has fallen—from the boarded-up theater where he once made his stage debut to the once-formidable presence of his father, Lou Petronsky, now 74 and slipping rapidly into dementia. Danny has come home to confront the reality his siblings have been avoiding. His sister Joanie has cut off all contact with Lou, while his brother Tommy, a flamboyant Southern boat entrepreneur, insists something must finally be done.

Danny and his wife Ash move in temporarily, though Ash is eager to return to her career at her father’s fashion magazine. Tensions flare almost immediately between Ash and Graciella, Lou’s live-in caretaker and emotional anchor. Lou’s remaining moments of clarity revolve almost exclusively around Graciella, deepening Ash’s resentment. When Danny decides to extend his stay and sends Ash back to New York, she fires Graciella out of spite—leaving Lou further untethered and Danny struggling to care for a father who no longer recognizes him.

Seeking answers, Danny reconnects with Joanie, who finally reveals the truth behind her long estrangement: Lou sexually abused her as a child, disguising it as a “secret game.” The revelation shatters Danny’s image of his father.

Danny confronts Lou, but dementia has rendered him unreachable—lost in fragmented memories, confusion, and grief over Graciella’s absence. The doctor tells Danny this time is referred to as “the long goodbye.” Danny finds it hard to come to grips with that finality, “he’s not that bad”… But one evening, Lou, a Vietnam war vet, climbs out onto the roof of his house, brandishing a shotgun, taking aim at the moon. The police are called to defuse the situation.

Though Joanie and Tommy agree Lou should be placed in a home, Danny clings to the belief that somewhere beneath the disease, the truth still exists. Hoping to awaken his father’s past, Danny persuades Tommy to take them fishing at Lighthouse Creek, briefly reviving Lou before the illness pulls him back under. After Lou’s 75th birthday, Danny brings Graciella back and convinces Joanie to face her father one last time. She does—but forgiveness remains impossible, and she suggests that their mother’s death may have been tied to Lou’s abuse, a possibility Danny refuses to accept.

Ash returns unexpectedly and senses the growing bond between Danny and Graciella. Danny’s marriage, already fragile, unravels as he finds unexpected renewal in Graciella’s quiet strength and shared pain. Ash leaves for good.

Soon after, Lou wanders away from the house. The entire neighborhood—including Danny’s long-neglected childhood friends—joins the search. Two days later, Lou is found hiding in a doghouse several blocks away. Going through his father’s pockets, Danny discovers a note that reveals his mother’s suicide.

Overwhelmed by rage and grief, Danny steals Tommy’s boat and takes Lou out to their old fishing grounds. In a moment of desperate resolve, he pushes his father overboard—then immediately rescues him. But as Danny steers back toward shore, Lou loses his fishing hat and jumps in to save it… unbeknownst to Danny.

Danny loses his father, but in the aftermath, he begins to heal. His fractured relationships with his siblings and old friends are renewed, and with Graciella by his side, he finds a way to face the real truth of his family’s past—and move forward into a brighter, hard-earned future.

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Screenplay
Budget:
Low
Starring Roles For:
Liev Schreiber
GERALD MCRANEY
30s Hispanic Woman
In the Vein Of:
Away from Her
Affliction
Terms of Endearment
Posted:
04/01/2020
Updated:
03/07/2026
Author Bio:
Art D'Alessandro co-founded and ran one of the Southeast’s most highly regarded talent schools for over 22 years. His love of movies has led to nearly 50 screenplays bearing his name as writer, including the produced feature films “The Final Season” (1100 screens, Sean Astin, Powers Boothe, et al), "She Drives Me Crazy" (Lifetime, Winner of CTV's Gemini Award for Best TV Movie, Melinda Clarke), "Mayor Cupcake" (Showtime, Lea Thompson, Zoey Deutch, & Judd Nelson), "Letters to God" (900 screens, Ralph Waite), “All Shook Up” (Sarah Chalke & Frank Gorshin) and the award-winning indie thriller “ZZYZX”, starring Kenny Johnson of The Shield and SWAT fame.

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