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Pebbles on the Beach

An adventurous school-boy is confronted by an Apparition which materialises into the girl of his dreams and steals his heart.

Placed at an English countryside, it is a story of love-at-first-sight which endures to adulthood. David is on holiday from school. His vacation spent with his Uncle John in a mansion on the hill has come to an end. Dressed in school uniform, David bides his time kicking Pebbles in the pristine waters of the secluded magical beach below when he's startled by a colourful mist. He stops. Looks up and blinks as the mist reveals an apparition. Then, just as quickly as it appeared the mist disintegrates to a voice. A beautiful young girl with flowing blond hair stands before him. "Hello, I'm Beth". In a few short moments Beth steals his heart, lures him into a magical cave and leaves him mesmerised vowing to return. As the years pass and adulthood is upon them, their puppy-love grows, enduring the test of time. Along the same magical beach that brought them together, Beth accepts David's proposal of marriage... "of course, silly".

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Short Screenplay
Budget:
Micro
Starring Roles For:
a young Rachel McAdams type
A young Warren Beatty type
Sally Field
In the Vein Of:
Sabrina

Posted:
08/27/2016
Updated:
10/10/2024
Author Bio:
https://www.imdb.com/name/nm5673147 https://www.moviebytes.com https://www.filmfreeway.com https://www.stage32.com/Profiler Screenwriter: seven (7) Award-winning Feature Scripts and two (2) Short Screenplays Author: four (4) non-fiction books - Amazon "Best Seller" 'Elders and The Real Story' (1994) - 'Payback... and The Devil called' (2007), 'The Executioner' (1992), `My Reply' (1990) Publisher/Editor: 'Profiler' Magazine - distributed nationally and throughout New Zealand through news agencies by the Packer network (NSC) and Gordon & Gotch Poet: AllPoetry - 4 poems - Wildsound - Top 100 - `Little Girl Lost' (Princess Diana), 'Changing Landscapes' (Heinz Mager), 'The Saint - Kathleen' (my Mum), 'The Master.

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Contest Results:
Hollywood Moving Pictures (First Place, Finalist til Awards Night 2019) [2018]
Christian Screenplay (First Place, Best Script, Best Writer, Fan ) [2017]
Los Angeles Independent (First Place) [2015]
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