[Story Pros International]
Back

A Christmas Redemption

15 years after her twin brother’s untimely death on Christmas Eve, Ebonee Pritchard returns home facing a holiday she truly despises. After her mother's wish, Ebonee is greeted by 4 Christmas spirits, the last of them, Revenge.

In the script, "A Christmas Redemption," Ebonee Pritchard, a driven and successful corporate raider in Charlotte, North Carolina, faces a life-altering journey during the Christmas season. Known for her ruthless business tactics, Ebonee's life takes a dramatic turn when she returns to her hometown for her uncle's funeral. Despite her success, Ebonee harbors deep-seated guilt and unresolved grief over the death of her brother, David, 15 years earlier, a death she inadvertently caused.

Upon arrival, Ebonee plans to shut down the town’s beloved but failing candy factory, which is now managed by her high school best friend, Rose Davies. Rose is struggling financially and personally, especially as a single mother to her son, Zaire, who has serious health issues. Ebonee's initial plan to dismantle the factory for profit starts to falter as she reconnects with her past, including Rose and Marcus “Shadow” Caldwell, a major drug dealer she once romanced.

The plot thickens on Christmas Eve when Ebonee's mother, Regina makes a wish to help change her daughter’s attitude towards Christmas and life. Later that night Ebonee is visited by four spirits: the Ghost of Christmas Past, Present and Future, and the unusual Ghost of Revenge. These spectral visits force Ebonee to confront her past actions, particularly on the night of David's death. The spirits reveal not only her role in the tragic event but also the dire consequences of her current path, including Zaire's worsening condition.

Faced with these revelations, Ebonee undergoes a profound transformation. She sees the potential for change, not just for herself but also for the community she was ready to dismiss but also redemption against the people responsible for David’s Death. Motivated by a newfound sense of responsibility and compassion, Ebonee devises a plan to save the candy factory, which involves innovative business strategies and securing a deal that revives the factory while preserving local jobs.

As the Christmas spirit works its magic, Ebonee not only mends her relationships but also begins to rebuild her life, finding forgiveness and a sense of purpose that had eluded her for years. "A Christmas Redemption" is a story of healing, hope, and the redemptive power of giving back, reminding us that it's never too late to change our ways and make a positive impact on the world around us.

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Screenplay
Budget:
Low
Starring Roles For:
Keke Palmer - Ebonee Pritchard
Denzel Washington - Uncle Oscar
Octavia Spencer - Regina Pritchard
In the Vein Of:
A Christmas Carol (Anyone of them)
Scrooged
Get Out
Posted:
06/20/2024
Updated:
06/20/2024
Author Bio:
Atlanta-based screenwriter from New York who specializes in writing Fantasy, Horror and Drama based stories. I grew up in the Bronx, New York and I’ve always been passionate about storytelling and intrigued by the impression it leaves on people that somehow guides the decisions we make in life. I bring good storytelling, originality, and excitement to my stories and I love diving headfirst into the research and overall production of them. I am a writer, and I love my craft.

Show More

Go Pro!