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Best Action/Adventure Screenplays

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JENNA'S GONE

An untried deputy and a hunting guide find their lifelong friendship turning lethal as they track after the kidnappers of the waitress they both love, each suspecting the other of a role in her disappearance. Script Excerpt

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THE TORTOISE AND THE HEIR

When hired to find heirs to a large will, a lone wolf San Francisco private investigator finds the heirs are being killed by the same assassin that murdered his girlfriend years before, and must decide whether to save the remaining heir, or abandon him to hunt down the assassin. Script Excerpt

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THE FAT LADY SINGS

Present day private investigator must journey from Duluth to Ohio to solve a case within three days in order to pay his bookie, then the PI and client must deal with the tragedy involving the person they are searching for. Script Excerpt

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