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Nightmare in a Jar

With her husband out of town on business, Lisa plans to spend time writing, until a woman shows up at her door selling special face cream; from there everything gets dark and freaky.

When Lisa’s husband goes out of town on business for four days, she plans to spend her days writing and doing artwork. But when a woman named Marty shows up at her door one morning to sell her a special cream that will make her face as smooth as vanilla pudding, things change for Lisa. At night a man shows up at her door asking for a beer and a cigarette. Later he appears in Lisa’s room while she is sleeping, spreading his grotesque body across her ceiling and surrounding her with his flesh, putting her head in his mouth and smearing his slime across her body. Although the memory begins to fade after she awakes, it happens again, this time even more grotesquely. Lisa begins to feel uncertain about what her reality really is. After applying the cream to her face for a few days, Lisa goes to town and encounters people who are shocked at her appearance; asking if she has been sick. One man even calls her husband, concerned, saying her skin is so thin he can see her veins. When her husband arrives back home and sees that she is as beautiful as ever, his worries about her health disappear. Then Lisa tells him about the story she is writing that will “scare the shit out of him.” The story is a combination of Lisa’s own reality and a story she has been working on.

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Format:
Screenplay
Starring Roles For:
Kate Hudson (hero)

Posted:
06/23/2016
Updated:
07/06/2024
Author Bio:
Judi Blaze is a novelist, former print and media journalist, and screenwriter. She has one feature screenplay, Squid Jiggers, and six short screenplays, one of which is Nightmare in a Jar, her first horror script.

She has won awards for several of her short stories, one of which is Squid Jiggers, her feature length screenplay that was a semi-finalist in the Nashville Film Festival and a finalist in the Women in Cinema International Screenwriters Competition.

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