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The Third Bomb

LOGLINE: When the duty-bound pilot of the third atomic bomb mission crash lands on a Japanese island and is imprisoned with other Allied POWs, he must escape and stop a disgraced commander from capturing his bomb – or manually detonate it himself.

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Posted:
08/21/2014
Updated:
09/13/2020
Author Bio:
OFFICIAL WEBSITE: www.thirdbomb.com WRITER FOR HIRE: www.storiesbyphil.com

INDUSTRY FEEDBACK:

"This is an incredibly well written script with strong and three-dimensional characters, a well threaded theme, and action sequences that are both visual and exciting" - Black List reader

“Very well-written and engrossing script with a strong, original hook and twist. GRADE: Recommend” - Danny Manus, Nobullscript.com

“Excels in story, dialogue and originality.

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Contest Results:
Nashville Fest (First Place, Action/ Adventure) [2014]
Final Draft/Big Break (Semifinalist) [2016]
Ohio Independent (First Place) [2014]
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