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EXPLOSION AT BLACK TOM!

Federal Agents -- including a young J. Edgar Hoover and a badass female translator -- track German saboteurs plotting the July 30, 1916 Black Tom Island explosion in New York harbor - the terrorist attack on America! Professional Coverage: “Recommend” - Dave Trottier (Author “The Screenwriter’s Bible”). SEMI-FINALIST - Fade In Awards-True Story/Bio Contest

The Black Tom Island Munitions depot – located picturesquely in New York Harbor opposite the Statue of Liberty -- stored more explosives than any arsenal in the United States. And in 1916 it was, unbelievably, completely unprotected. No wonder the Germans wanted to blow it up!

And German sabotage was becoming quite a problem in the country. In spite of President’s Wilson’s cry for neutrality, lots of bad things were happening. Former Texas Ranger Tom Howard is sent to New York City to run the Bureau of Investigation’s task force on espionage

Joining Howard are young agents J. Edgar Hoover and Clyde Tolson (both gay). Also assigned is Katherine Burkhardt, an attractive, talented bilingual agent who becomes Tom’s love interest

At the Black Tom Island depot, Depot Manager Jack Powers struggles with ever increasing deliveries of munitions, lack of storage capacity and no security. He is also romantically distracted by Jill Upton, a warehouse owner who quickly becomes Jack’s love partner.

The German’s also attempt to infect horses, destined for transport oversees, with the deadly glanders virus. Tom’s tough Texas Ranger father, “Lonesome Sam” Howard, joins the team to fight the saboteurs on the horse front in Virginia.

When a government Fact Finding Committee tours Black Tom, they are shocked to learn that two hundred thousand pounds of TNT plus one million rounds of small arms ammunition are exposed at any one time. Tom’s team quickly penetrate the saboteur’s lair and discover the manufacture of the infamous timed “pencil bomb.” When a drunken German courier leaves his briefcase of classified spy documents on the subway, Tom’s agents quickly and brilliantly rescues it.

The leaked document cause a furor; saboteurs move to attack Black Tom immediately. Alerted by informants. Tom’s team rushes to the island. The saboteurs are in the midst of setting the explosive when attacked by the federal agents. Amidst gunshots and pencil bombs, the depot is set ablaze and explodes.

The explosion is the largest ever on American soil. The story depicts the devastation incurred in Downtown Manhattan, the Statue of Liberty, Ellis Island, ships in New York Harbor, and nearby Jersey City. Explosions scenes are quite graphic.

Trapped in the depot, Tom pursues the saboteurs. In a spectacular fight scene, Tom rescues Katharine from death by an amazingly accurate long distance pistol shot.

The Black Tom depot is completely destroyed. Some saboteurs are apprehended. The official investigation is a white wash. President Wilson, doggedly trying to maintain neutrality, refers to Black Tom as an industrial accident. But German espionage is crippled.

Tom and Katherine marry and carry on their espionage work. The Bureau of investigation becomes the FBI. Nine months after the Black Tom explosion, President Wilson declares war of Germany.

Today Black Tom, largely forgotten, is commemorated as part of Liberty National Park in New Jersey.

Professional Coverage: "RECOMMEND" Dave Trottier (Author, "The Screenwriter's Bible")

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Screenplay
Budget:
Modest
Starring Roles For:
a young Colin Farrell type
a young Kate Winslett
A young Ben Stiller type
In the Vein Of:
Inspired by true events
Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy
Black Hawk Down
Posted:
03/03/2018
Updated:
04/03/2022
Author Bio:
Jim Saunders is a New York City-based professional writer, playwright, optioned screenplay writer and multiple contest winner. He has many years’ experience writing stage presentations, corporate films and multimedia projects; also a director and occasional actor.

Screenplays

Jim specializes in screenplays based on historical true events (including musicals), bio/pics and/or disasters. In alphabetical order:

“BOJANGLES, EUBIE AND BERT!” Three Black musical legends of the past – Bert Williams, Eubie Blake and Bill “Bojangles” Robinson – relive their show business success in spite of racism and theatrical bigotry.

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Contest Results:
Breaking Walls (Finalist) [2019]
Big Apple (Semifinalist) [2019]
Emerging Screenwriters (Semifinalist) [2019]
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