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*****The REVIEWS are in on The SOMMELIER************
Characters:very good, Quality of Writing: excellent... I enjoy your dialogue so much. I also enjoy how you introduce your characters... this is a brilliant script for those who like this specific genre. You've done a great effort and you are a very good writer... Keep up the good work."
"Overall: The action scenes were well-realized, and there were a lot of them. They all made sense within the plot and used the tools at hand (wine bottles, etc.) to good effect... Plot: A solid enough plot with a few good twists... I really, really loved the wine-tasting test... Very nice touch... Setting: I really liked the idea of setting an intrigue like this in a winemaking operation and vineyard. Setting worked well with the plot. Enjoyed the nod to Poe, both in the introduction and the flashback cellar scene with the bells."
"I think the setting and visuals that you have can be done nicely and keep the story contained. The vineyard, the cellars, the caves, etc are all pretty cool… Overall very clean draft as well... I think you have a lot of great elements..."
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BREFNI O'ROURKE is an optioned screenwriter who has studied filmmaking at the Academy of Art College San Francisco and SUNY Empire State New York. He is the author of more than 40 original feature-length screenplays.
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